As a story I like it a lot. Quite the clever twist. If you have not the foggiest what to do with it might I suggest throwing in a few gratuities sex scenes and pop it over to the Library side. They seem to need some new story ideas. That's up to you though. There are a few typos and such but I'm sure you can catch them I'll do a dean on it if Mr H doesn't show up in his properly semi sober curmudgeon form soon.
Mad Lews
ps don't forget the rest of the assignment.
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Last edited by Mad Lews; 09-29-2007 at 05:09 AM.
English does not borrow from other languages. English follows other languages into dark alleys, raps them over the head with a cudgel, then goes through their pockets for loose vocabulary and spare grammar.
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