Thank you very much Euryleia. I have had a read through and really enjoyed what I read. I will come back to it tomorrow and pick the very few nits I noticed.

I have to say that I really enjoyed both the plot and the different tones you brought to the story. The way you went from touches of humour in the first section, to very serious in the middle and finally the lightbulb moment at the end was excellent.

I feel I already know something about your characters and almost forget this was based on my own story! Well done. I will get H Dean to have a look at it too, and then we will be shipping you off very soon to level 3.