Well, I don't really mind first person writing, in fact I've read quite a few stories that I felt read a whole lot more intimately that way---a little like being told about some-one's naughtiest secrets or thoughts.

Isabella, I agree second person story telling--just don't go there. When I read erotic fiction I love to immerse myself in it, but there is just simply no way I'm ever going to get my head around being told something like: "..you stick your hard cock in her wet pussy..."