Euryleia,

sounds like a loverly grand scheme for the lucky threesome.

I do want to point out that I'm not an advocate of Tom Clancy type books that are so fast paced the reader comes to around 3:00am having read 500 pages before remembering to breath.

What I was hoping to show was that by controlling the pace you can get the reader far enough into the story that they're hooked.

Complexities and flowing descriptions also have their place but you already know that. I'm quite serious about a peek when you have the opus drafted.

OK something new and challenging coming right up.
say first thing tomorrow?

Affectionately

Lews