How short is too short?

[theladystouch]

Ladystouch,

I do like your style here,as you handle the dialogue and action descriptions quite well ,to the point that the reader easily can discern something about the characters as action unfolds.


But alas, as it turned out these additional chapters proved to be much like cutting a drum open to see what makes the sound.

Oooh, someone else who describes things for the mind's eye. Very pretty! And...I have been warned.

Thanks!
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Lady C

"Beauty is only skin deep, but ugly goes clear to the bone."