Walking

[moptop]

Once upon a time
I walked up and down the spine
Of a man who wasn't sure he liked it

He'd asked me if I would
I wasn't sure I could
My heels were long and thin and spiky

I'm a tender little sub
I'd rather give a rub
Or of course receive a thorough drubbing

But I went to the attack
And balanced on his back
Leaving small but quite deep indentations

My shoes were shiny and red
And with my careful tread
I gave his flesh a pointed going over

He hardly made a sound
As I pressed him to the ground
And I found I rather wished he would

I found myself enjoying
The sensation of toying
With his pliant flesh and tender nether regions

I put a bit more weight
Upon the buttocks of my mate
And gained a very satisfying groan

A dug my heels in his flesh
To punish him afresh
And then I went and spoiled it all by giggling

[MsUther]

Loved it! Very descriptive, I got sweet images on my mind

[Timberwolf]

Quite interesting. And I guess the giggling might not be all bad depending on one's timing.

[Warbaby1943]

Sounds like you at least had fun. Good writing.

[moptop]

Thanks, folks. It's an old memory, but still a giggle for me...

[TheDeSade]

Very Nice. I like the whimsey of it. Offsets the dark side of the situation and makes a nice balance.

[moptop]

Thanks, DeSade

[Echoes]

hehe, reminds me of a time a friend asked me to walk on his back. oh my! I am so happy I did not damage or hurt him in any way. It was scary and fun at the same time. Wonderful job and the giggles...well

[moptop]

thanks echoes

[Talia]

a little impishness in this. Very nice

[elyse]

Oh, really, really nicely done! Very evocative, great clarity of imagery!
-elyse
(ps. i giggled at the end, too!)

[frankee]

The last line made me giggle as well. Nice work!