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The Charmed Ones
Author: anonmix
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(Added on Sep 21, 2000)
(This month 28856 readers) (Total 59334 readers) |
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Three witch sisters were interrogated to confess their powers. They were brutally tortured and finally mutilated. |
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| Reviewer:
Nelson`
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Feb 18, 2009 |
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Not everyone's taste, but anyone reading the summary would know that. Deserves encouragement to improve for those readers who do like these ideas. (7/10)
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Mothbrad
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Apr 2, 2008 |
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Great witch torture story set in the modern day. Gruesome ending, so if you like flowers and kittens, and nothing else, this is probably not yer cuppa swill. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Gordi
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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" (Added on Sep 21, 2000) (This month 123 readers) (Total 23132 readers)
Three witch sisters were interrogated to confess their powers. They were brutally tortured and finally mutilated."
I love how people say they don't find the torture erotic. And how they don't like the fact that it's based on a tv show. IF YOU DONT LIKE THAT SHIT DONT READ IT. HE WARNS YOU IN THE DAMN DESCRIPTION.
And who the fuck is nitpicking word choice in a perverted story about dismembering some hot chick? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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Nov 12, 2002 |
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I like the Charmed TV show theme. The first 3/4 of the story is good (if you like torture) but I could have done without the mutilations at the very end. Would have been better with some other resolution at the end. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Apr 19, 2001 |
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What we need here is a dictionary, not a spell checker. A spell checker is of no
use when you use the wrong word but spell it correctly (to, too is only one
example).
Three women are abducted and tortured. That's it. That's the whole story. It's
not like nobody's written that one before. The fact that it's based on a TV show
also detracts. I'd have more respect for it if the author had bothered to invent
his own characters. The big problem, though, is that it's boring. I agree with
Oberon that it needs something in the way of a plot.
One final note. With regard to Prue's mussels screaming for release--torture of
witches is one thing, but abuse of mollusks I cannot abide. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
BuZu
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Apr 16, 2001 |
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A story written by someone who knows a lot about the show.
Only involved scenes of 2 for the 3 Charmed Ones. Revise
a little and the story is perfect. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jabroni |
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Nov 9, 2000 |
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+ there's concept, and a plot, well written.
- spell check, lacks a struggle on the story
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Oberon |
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Nov 7, 2000 |
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The concept is there, but it falls at the end. There is no change in character or motivation to serve as a resolution. Spelling and grammar are a downfall in this particular story. How did a new witch hunt come about? That is the REAL story behind this vignette. Nakedness and torture do not make an erotic story, but the framework is there on which to build it. (5/10)
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hyphen 666 |
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Sep 24, 2000 |
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The author has potential. The torture part is above average for this type of story, but the subsequent mutilations could have been skipped without doing any harm to the story. Everyone who writes should have spell check and also read what they have written a day or so after they think it's in shape to submit. Try to remember that english with all its idiosyncrasies is Jinn's second language (6/10)
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Baer-chen |
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Sep 22, 2000 |
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Outstanding! Watch the spellling and grammar though. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Sep 22, 2000 |
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don't like mutilating torture or stories based on tv shows. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe |
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Sep 21, 2000 |
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Sorry, this just doesn't do it for me. Like the other review, I found the misspelled words very distracting. Nothing erotic about this story (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Tom Roper |
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Sep 21, 2000 |
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Much too gruesome for my tastes. The tortures were actually mutilations, and there was nothing about it that was sensuous. In addition the spelling and grammer are atrocious, which further detracts. More time editing would be called for. (3/10)
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