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Making The Chef Pay Author: Powerone
(Added on Feb 16, 2003) (This month 3794 readers) (Total 24258 readers)
A disgruntled employee holds Cleo for two days in her restauņant. Her body is used for his pleasure. Cooking instruments were never meant to be used like this.

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: greeneyes (Edit) Rating: Mar 8, 2004
I have read a lot of your work and I am always impressed. You are a great talent. And, as a note to those who sit and count every small grammar mistake, I think you are missing the point. If perfect grammar is what gets you hot, then get a life. (9/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jan 18, 2004
Please continue it, so far it is great (9/10)

Reviewer: RTNYMaster (Edit) Rating: Feb 18, 2003
Syntax, grammar, incomplete sentences...a chore to read. Not worth the effort required. (2/10)

Reviewer: peachmellon (Edit) Rating: Feb 18, 2003
I enjoyed it.. very well written.. i am looking for more on this story.. yes i enjoyed it.. and thank you so much for writing it.. you had Paragraphs, the spelling was a A+,, your ideas flowed well and smooth, not choppy at all. thank you so much
bye for now (8/10)
Replied by: RTNYMaster (Edit) (Feb 18, 2003)
I counted at least 10 errors in punctuation, grammar, word usage etc. in three lines, no wonder you thought this story was well written.

Reviewer: anguisette (Edit) Rating: Feb 16, 2003
Some syntax and grammar issues, but I really like the storyline. Please write more!! (8/10)

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