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Violet
Author: Thndrshark
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(Added on Nov 30, 2000)
(This month 52616 readers) (Total 111834 readers) |
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A Girl enslaved by her best friend put through many tortures and pains. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Feb 16, 2012 |
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Was quick & a bit rushed but very interesting. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 14, 2011 |
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Is this story implausible? Sure, but only when you look at it from the outside -from within our own little world which we call reality... a reality where some pretty amazing and implausible things are every day fodder, by the way.
I thought "Violet" to be an above average erotic story. One that does go over the edge a lot of the time, but the edge which is crossed here is giving access to some exciting views.
Granted, the Shark has written stories which I consider to be better, but bulldozing "Violet" because of it being "implausible" is as -well, plausible as saying the Roadrunner cartoons are stupid because of being unrealistic...
What I do (most of the time) is first get my mind inside the world an author has created and start from there. Usually, nothing's implausible then. Just like the Roadrunner cartoons are great -because you know it's not the real world.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 22, 2010 |
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Congratulations on getting the lowest rating i have ever given. A clever idea poorly executed i agree with everything Jonathan says.
No characterization at all, little plot and totally implausible. (2/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 6, 2004 |
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Just Damn Good, you never disappoint (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
julise
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Sep 7, 2003 |
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Thundershark is one of my favorites in BDSM fiction. One can almost feel the tight bondage that he depicts. I agree that he might go a little overboard, but sometimes that is what one does in fiction. In my opinion, some of the earlier reviewers were a little harsh and maybe a little picky. The writing was pretty good so what if it is a little unbelievable. Thundershark does not claim that this is a true story. (9/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 26, 2003 |
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I'm with Jonathan on this one. The writing is fine and the storyline is an exciting idea, but the whole thing is pretty implausible and it does read much like a bdsm manual. There is minimal dialogue, characterization or development, which would have added so much to the story, and it is not very well planned or structured. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
johnsteel
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Oct 17, 2002 |
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the first story which I read by the great thndrshark, excellent stuff! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dumpington
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Oct 8, 2001 |
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Some excellent eroticism in this one, but a bit too much cruelty. I mean, I love seeing a beautiful girl dominated and tied up by another girl, but I think it's always more erotic when there's some serious attraction involved. This one's too mercenary, like the dom is doing it just for the money. Still, the writing is good. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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May 23, 2001 |
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I can only hope that Silverfish is right in saying that this is not one of
Thundershark's better efforts. It's pretty bad.
I enjoy reading hyphen666's comments and usually agree with his assessments,
but this time I don't. This story is not well written, nor is there any
developement whatever.
The plot is so contrived and the narrative so clunky that the story is hard to read.
"I forgot to tell you. Jenny decided to attend summer school. She won't be
back for three months."
This is pretty typical of the level of thought that went into this effort. It's little
more than a vehicle for an overly detailed description of the mechanics of
bondage. The characters have no true thoughts or feelings. Also, the
substitution of the word "where" for the verb "were" throughout the story drives
me nuts.
(2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Silverfish
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Apr 12, 2001 |
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As it stands Thndrshark is one of my favorite authors, however this is not one of his best pieces. It is however a nice little tale feature some enticing bondage situations. Short and sweet. Good for a quick read. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Dec 2, 2000 |
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Bondage and domination by the numbers, but well written with good development. I doubt if any woman would have survived the extreme bondage our heroine endured, but that's the beauty of writing fiction. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
L.M. |
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Dec 1, 2000 |
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Excellent! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Silverfish |
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Nov 30, 2000 |
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Nice. (9/10)
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