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House on Second Street
Author: J.
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(Added on May 3, 2003)
(This month 34759 readers) (Total 74444 readers) |
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A young woman seeks the One. The One that will take her to the depths of depravity and degradation. She willingly submits herself to him, with the expected results. An extreme story, so go no further if you're queasy. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pharma
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Dec 23, 2016 |
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Extremely hot end, thanks! I wish the whole story to be like the ending)) (8/10)
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kicksnf
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Jun 15, 2011 |
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SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2012)
- Well, why don't you go see a doctor then?
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 10, 2009 |
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I'm with ladys maid on this one. Story is a tad rushed at times, but it stands nevertheless.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jun 26, 2007 |
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I think my naturally curly hair just went straight from fear! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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when i read the synposis i had my doubts but as i read the story i said , nice sleeper story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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Great job J (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lindalookingla
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May 25, 2003 |
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Excellent work by J. Extremely graphic, with imaginative ideas that are well developed. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
deepbluemm
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May 6, 2003 |
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Beautiful J
Thank you for writing this story. It is breathtaking. I love the way that your mind and heart work. Deepest subjucation and service. The man receiving that would worship you honey. You are a goddess in my mind. Again I love the person that could created this deep masterpiece. Happy to correspond with this most beautiful and deepest of totally satisfying subs.
Mike (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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May 5, 2003 |
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I am tempted to write this as a reply to ladys maid's review. The primary strength of this story was that, until near the end, it was excellent stroke material. I was so caught up that I didn't notice any problems with punctuation or sentence structure (even though I read the review before the story). My problem was that the train came off the tracks at the end. I'm guessing that the final 15-20k were written in one sitting and that the author should have taken a masturbation break and slept on it before concluding. This story, while not memorable, was not a waste of my time, either. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 4, 2003 |
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The author was in way too much of a hurry to get into the gory details and, in doing so, failed to make the story anywhere near convincing. It needed some build-up and character development in the first part and there was far too little. I was also surprised that, although the writer is clearly literate, the punctuation and sentence structuring was very poor (e.g. several "and"s in the same sentence, over-use of commas, etc.). (4/10)
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