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Not A Saint Author: Powerone
(Added on May 31, 2003) (This month 7537 readers) (Total 38793 readers)
A naive girl, a victim of the lust of an older man is taken against her will and raped. She is forced to cum with each perverted act until she finally succumbs to the advances of her captor.

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: DaveH (Edit) Rating: Jun 2, 2003
As always, Powerone proves that he is one of the Internet's best erotic literature authors. Completely well written, down to all the delicious details, I can only hope it continues with more parts. (9/10)
Replied by: Powerone (Edit) (Jun 2, 2003)
Sorry, but that is where the story will end. Jessy19 and I wrote two stories, this one and Precious Things from a dare.
Thanks for enjoying it.

Reviewer: Barbara Anne (Edit) Rating: Jun 1, 2003
Hard to tell if this wild fantasy of yours is an improvement on your last story or not. Surely the co-writer would know for sure. I keep being drawn into reading Powerone's literary excursions, in the hope of finding those special qualities that must exist in his mind--somewhere, but I have come to the conclusion that perhaps I'm really a masochist after all. At least he has a sense of humour. (6/10)
Replied by: Powerone (Edit) (Jun 2, 2003)
You just want to get me on the other end of your whip. LOL

Reviewer: veru_skjava (Edit) Rating: Jun 1, 2003
The story premise is plausible. I have to agree with the previous reviewer, the ending just doesn't work.
That being said, the editing is a big disappointment. Sentences switch from first person to third person.
This is not the authors usual style. Also proofreading with more then spell check is suggested. Several correctly spelled words such as are instead of our, now instead of not make it difficult to follow.
If re-writen I may reconsider my review. (5/10)
Replied by: Powerone (Edit) (Jun 2, 2003)
The first and third person was difficult, especially with two writers. No matter how many times you go over, it gets confusing when editing.
Damn "not" and "now". Fast fingers.

Reviewer: don11 (Edit) Rating: Jun 1, 2003
I have a sense of MIcheal. That works well.
Given this personality the story works well ... until the ending!
The action is taut. The vocab and spelling need work! (7/10)
Replied by: Powerone (Edit) (Jun 2, 2003)
We had a number of endings. I think the ending could have worked, it was just too abrupt.

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