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Blackmailed Housewife
Author: Master John
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(Added on Jun 10, 2003)
(This month 70234 readers) (Total 167895 readers) |
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Caroline is a housewife and is caught out having an affair. Her husbands boss blackmails her into becoming his slave. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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What bothers me most in these "cheating-wife-is-blackmailed-into-submissiveness" scenarios, is the fact that the outcome of giving in to the blackmail is often tenfold the burden of admitting the affair to hubby and take the concequences.
Especially when, like in this story, the author doesn't come-up with a decent incentive as to why the housewife so desperately wants to cling to a marriage already gone awry in the first place.
Secondly, although the build-up of the story is decent, the plotline and dialogues emanate an immature simplicity, as if the tale was written down by a twelve year old.
I can't go further with this story than what the rating says: "Somewhat enjoyable. Acceptable writing skills".
JJ (6/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 22, 2007 |
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Any story with a young house wife being blackmailed, humiliated gets my vote, would like more frequent updates, it just keeeps getting better and better (10/10)
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johnnytoobad
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Jun 10, 2003 |
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Excellent story. I love the theme, cant wait for the next one. (9/10)
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