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    The Classroom Ordeal
    
    Author: Michael Alexander
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    (Added on Sep 10, 2003)
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    A young student is caught passing notes and receives her punishment from her teacher. | 
   
 
 
   
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    theroadtoad
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    Sep 14, 2007 | 
   
   
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        good story. I liked the twist at the end. (9/10) 
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    Apr 29, 2005 | 
   
   
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        i lked it i just wish the teacher and students roles were reversed (8/10) 
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    Yoru
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    Jan 17, 2005 | 
   
   
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        Very enjoyable and well written, but I think there was a tiny little more potential in the story... Hoping for more (9/10) 
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    Nov 24, 2004 | 
   
   
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        Another fine piece of work. Crisp, erotic, to the point, and a twist finish. (10/10) 
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    Emily
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    Sep 24, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Succinct, seductive, and sexy.  A most enjoyable read! (9/10) 
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    wabbit
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    Sep 16, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Well written, but without all the erotic power of "The Phone Call"....Still, i hope to see much more of this Authors works on the site (7/10) 
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    woolfighter
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    Sep 13, 2003 | 
   
   
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        If longer, I would quote a ten. Let the note's author play with her all he wants, and his friends too.  (9/10) 
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    Sep 11, 2003 | 
   
   
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        An enjoyable story and a fast read.  I wished the author would have spent a little more time developing the theme. I wasn't able to suspend my disbelieve regarding how, without protest and barring the author setting the scene, a teenage girl would allow herself to be stripped to the bare in front of her class.   (6/10) 
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    S_Couture
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    Sep 10, 2003 | 
   
   
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        This is a great little story.  Really liked the contents of the note at the end.  Reminds me a little of some of the old porn stories I used to read. (9/10) 
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woolfighter
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        - Couture, I agree with you but don't you think she wouldn't went away smiling?
 
       
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