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Caduceus Club
Author: C. Lakewood
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(Added on Mar 9, 2004)
(This month 22274 readers) (Total 43318 readers) |
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A 34-year-old school teacher agrees to "model" for a group of medical and nursing students and faculty. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Eve Adorer
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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[On the other hand, why stop at one review when the target is so delicious? So here’s the second of three….]
I have never ever claimed to be ‘a writer’ (whatever that means): Lakewood obviously does, and takes others to task as if they did. That makes Lakewood fair game for a whiff of the old grapeshot….
I have just had the misfortune to read this story. Considering that s/he is such a strutting peacock it is surprising to find that Lakewood has so little talent to display. There is nothing behind his/her over-confident walk. Lakewood’s writing has no bottom let alone tail feathers. The comedy and the tragedy are in the fact that s/he does not realise it. I would feel sorry for Lakewood but hey, this is a S&M site!
As Lakewood is so fond of giving away the ending of other people’s stories, let me tell you the ending of this one. Nothing happens. Indeed ‘nothing happens’ aptly summarises the beginning and middle of the story as well.
I would reach for (and no doubt misquote) the cliché that it represents the triumph of style over substance, save that there is no style either.
I’ll grant it is written in excellent English; but so are the engravings on many a tombstone. This story is dead. It never saw life. I am only too pleased to assist at its overdue cremation.
EA (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 28, 2006 |
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Enjoyed it, but as another reader reader wrote, Amy would suit better in an older neutral women.
Story is good exiting, sometimes little long and too much details. Overall still good (6/10)
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- Replied by:
C_Lakewood
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2006)
- While I guess I'm happy that you found my story
"good exiting," I must point out that, in fact,
nobody wrote "older neutral woman." An "old
[i.e., former] student" is not necessarily an
"older...woman," and what, in your mind, would
constitute a "neutral" woman? (Impartial?
Asexual? Achromatic? A tertium quid?) Please
explain.
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| Reviewer:
Ladyvet
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Aug 26, 2004 |
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Well written, with excellent attention to detail and an obvious knowledge of female physiology and sexual response! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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This one has its moments, but it also has lots of repetition and even periods of brief boredom for this reader. Since the author has already demonstrated a gift for writing, perhaps this was deliberate, only the author knows for sure. The ending was kind of cute but I doubt if there could be very much more involved unless the story moves into areas that do not seem to be the author's particular cup of tea based on the previous work. Despite all these nicks, nits, cavils and quibbbles, it is still a few large cuts above what is usually the bill of fare at this site. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mantis
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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Good imaginative stuff with a sensitive approach to characterisation. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Mar 12, 2004 |
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I liked it, but I thought (and don't read on if you don't want stroy details given away) that the character of Amy would have been better if she would have been an old student of the teachers instead of her niece. That would have made the payback motive stronger and more believable, which is important since the reader also has to stretch his imagination to get into that new device they're testing. And why do people never read a contract before they sign it?! (7/10)
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Moggy
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Mar 12, 2004 |
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I must compliment the author on his(?) writing style. It flows well and allows us into character of the narrator. (7/10)
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Omdom
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Mar 12, 2004 |
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Skillfully written with great imagination. The author gets you involved quickly and holds your attention. I wanted more description and that is a compliment to the author's ability to tell an excition and believable story. Well done! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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i realy enjoyed it, for some reason it seemed different then most stories i have read (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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Mar 10, 2004 |
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Well written. I'm looking forward to her further adventures. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 10, 2004 |
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Well written and reasonably well thought out. However no where close to the wild orgasmic high of "The Laundromat". More along the lines of the Orgasmatron in Woody Allen's movie "Sleeper". (7/10)
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teamster
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Mar 9, 2004 |
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most amusing and well paced... a refreshing change from the usual ass beating and suck my dick you slut type stuff. (8/10)
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