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Greed!
Author: Sir Thomas
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(Added on Apr 5, 2004)
(This month 94830 readers) (Total 145693 readers) |
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Casey is a girl in search of a future in modeling. But by a strange series of events she is offered the role of bondage / sex slave for a strange group of people in Nevada. There she is trained for a new career, The training is harsh but tolerable. She is pushed to her limits in every regard. Her day starts with exercise in pony-girl bondage. It only gets more extreme from there. Why does she do this? Greed! |
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obobo
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Jan 29, 2011 |
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Very interesting story. Highly recommended (10/10)
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Very interesting, exquisite and detailed descriptions of costumes, equipment and settings. (8/10)
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bracemaiden
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One of the best stories I've read. I savored every word. This story is why I shouldn't feel guilty about giving out more 10's, for it truly ranks higher. The bondage was interesting and creative, perspective changes were easy to follow. Slaves do become sore after stringent bondage positions, and that was captured. The caring shown for the slaves was wonderful. Great story! (10/10)
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Winnie
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Mar 19, 2005 |
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Excelent and unusual. Only one disappointment, well actually two, what happens next to the girls? (10/10)
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littleslut
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Jun 28, 2004 |
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simply wonderful (10/10)
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Jun 22, 2004 |
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This may end up as a classic (10/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Apr 19, 2004 |
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Extremely captivating... I couldn't stop reading this story. The characters were very believable. I do wonder what happened to Chris... Did she fall to the wayside as well??? I like others hope there is a sequel to this story. I for one hope Hugo would buy her. (10/10)
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WackySpurtz
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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Story was about the commodification of the pony woman as she increasingly felt the need to further prostitute herself. Money is not so very sexy, but I give it a 9 for its sheer power as a story. (9/10)
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ozzystoy
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There are very few stories out there that totally captivate me in the manner I was captured by this story. I could imagine each and every step of the story, not wanting it to end. Great Story!!!! (10/10)
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Nice details in description, specialy the bodymodifications are well written. I hope we will see an continuing in future, would like to read more from Your type of chastity ideas. (10/10)
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I love the multiple perspectives and the detailed descriptions...but I need more! Please tell me that you\'ll write a sequel! I\'d love to know what happens to Casey on the auction block! (10/10)
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There are lots of involuntary slavery stories, and voluntary slavery features in many more stories. Some voluntary stories involve a committed couple, others are more pragmatic. Some pragmatic stories include an eventual monetary reward to the slave, but this is the first one I've seen based on financial incentives from beginning to end. What a great idea! A free market in tastes most of society finds abhorent! Capitalism at its best, overturning preconceptions in the future as it has throughout its history! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
SirThomas
(Edit) (Apr 6, 2004)
- Thanks to all for the comments and praise. For years I've been reading various stories that had certain features and behaviours of the slaves and masters. Some things sort of bothered me and I wanted to try a different tack.
For instance, the terms Master and Mistress are common to stories. But you can't expect people to use those terms in public without drawing attention. That's why I insisted on the slave using the first name of the owner.
Another issue were the eyes. I've always read about diverting the gaze of the slave away from the owner. Why not insist on directing the eyes toward the owner? To me it made more sense. I think it makes for a more interesting scene.
Later.
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Spitman
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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Fantastic story - modification is an inadequate word to describe such inventiveness. My - er - hair stood on end from beginning to end. (9/10)
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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Very enjoyable and well written. (9/10)
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