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Giving A Reason
Author: T-Luv
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(Added on Aug 6, 2004)
(This month 39851 readers) (Total 49043 readers) |
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15-year-old Erin is unhappy because her father hasn't spanked her in a long time. She finds a way to fix that problem. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 2, 2006 |
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The unfortunate formatting of the text does not bring the quality of the story down. It is clear that the girl has sexual needs and the spanking gives her a "kick". I liked the story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 8, 2004 |
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This one had all sorts of potential, but it never really held together. It totally lacked heat, which is a big problem for this reader. The ending was a bit ambivalent and could have been taken in a number of ways; I chose the nastiest of course. The breezy writing style was fine, but the strange paragraphing, probably the result of a software glitch, kept getting in the way. I'd like to see the author handle a meatier topic and kick it up at least a couple of notches. That might be a story worth reading. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
T-Luv
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2004)
- Thanks for the heads-up on the paragraphing. It looks like there was a problem anywhere I had a dash or an ellipsis. The problem doesn't exist in my original, so I'll have to blame Jinn's software. I'll see if I can get him to fix it.
The lack of "heat" in this story was intentional. The story was really more about the father/daughter relationship than about the spanking or sex. I'm not sure why you think the ending was ambivalent. This wasn't intended to be an incest story, if that's what you mean.
Check out my other stories for "meatier" topics - I've got some nasty stuff here ;-)
- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2004)
- Incest was not on my radar.I'll take your tip and see what other goodies you have tucked away.
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