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Jill's Wild Weekend
Author: Lex Ludite
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(Added on Sep 29, 2004)
(This month 69237 readers) (Total 152827 readers) |
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A weekend of nearly non-stop brutality, humiliation, torture, rape, and degradation convinces Jill to turn over a new leaf and provides husband, Tim, wih some new insights into his wife's other side. It's home improvement, over the top with a vengeance, as Jill's husband, mother, children, friends, neighbors, and the university crowd get together to show her the error of her ways. |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 1, 2004 |
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Well written and a fresh plot to boot! As a spoof, the story brings out the characters well. As erotic fiction, the story brims with activities for most everyone interested in m-dom.
Most interested in seeing the next part! Congrats on a job well done, as are most of yours. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2004)
- What can I say to your very generous review; perhaps thank you might be appropriate. I don't think you will be disappointed by the rest of this story. The next installment will likely be out within a week since I am submitting it today.
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mkemse
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Sep 30, 2004 |
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Can't add anything more to the rating, anything elsei add would ruin a perfecr 10, but you are the king of erotica.
I realy have no set standards per sey, what i do is read a story, if i find it ertoic i give it a god review, everything i have ever read by you has been a solid 8-10
oone thing i would love to use you do is a long or short as your would want story, deal with Maldom, NC/Blackmail, and having his victim not only take an enema but being forced to hold it, while he ejoyes watching her suffer in pain and sweat from the pressure of retaining the enema, but this is just an idea, i have not seen anything like this yet, you would probably do a killer job with this theme and ideas (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Sep 29, 2004)
- I would be a fool if I didn't just say thank for your most generous review. I can only hope that the remaining two parts, both now being edited, not one of my favorite tasks, will continue to meet your standards.
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darksource
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Sep 30, 2004 |
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Amazing, first to try and appeal to a specialized group of readers with your last posting, now you get real original by writing a spoof on the "Home Improvements" series, real original
I was hoping this new posting would bring back the erotic theme so prevelent in your other writings, i was sadly dissapointed.
I hope in the future you will at the very least use original material, not that as a spoof from a TV show and appeal to everyone and not say once again "I am broadeninig my horizons by being more specilized in what I write. If this is still the case you not only missed the dock, your ship is in the wrong port.
The story also, based on a family PG TV show and a spoof at that is not even believeable
But the grammer and layout a good
Hope your next post goes back to what you do best and nothing like this tripe piece of "Literature"
1st, I am not attacking you, I am simply critiqueing your story, in the United States Of AmericaI assume you are aware that I do have the right to freedom of expression and speach.
My opnion was simply to take a TV show like Home Improvements and make an erotica story out of it was not what I expect from you, I am very well aware that you do alot of reviewing, your reviews are all excellent, I was only hoping your writing would follow the same path
In regard to your question, i have no need or any reason to "GO Away" as you so elegently phrased it.
I will always excersize my freedom of speach and expression as a US Citizen, whether you care for how I view your stories is entirely up to you.
But no, I will not go away, I have no rason to. If you felt personally attack by my review I extend my deepest apologies, rest asured my review was based on the story it was not meant in any way shape or form as as attach on you personally, simply a statement of how I viewed your writing thats all there was.
As far as 'My cup of tea" there is no such thing, my intrested in reading erotica spands a globe, i enjoy almost any subject matter as long as it is written in an erotic way with erotic intent, this one wasn't.
(4/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Sep 29, 2004)
- You appear to have an agenda that I don't understand. Your comments are beginning to get out of line totally. If you personally don't like what I am doing these days, then go away. As you may or may not know, I also do a great deal of reviewing and one thing I never do is attack something just because it isn't my cup of tea.I stay away and leave the reviewing to those more interested and qualified to assist the author.
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LordVetinari
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Sep 30, 2004 |
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Nicely captures the spirit of the characters that inspired. Also a wealth of interesting ideas and torments. The author does a nice job of firing off ideas in the imagination, without trying to talk it to death. A very solid piece, and well worth reading. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2004)
- Your positive review is very much appreciated. On the subject of talking things to death, I must agree, but also offer the observation that it sometimes can be a very fine line to walk.
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Rocky
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Sep 29, 2004 |
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Excellent, if rather implausible plot...but, hey, it's fiction, right? Well written, literate and enjoyable to read. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Sep 29, 2004)
- Thanks for your very generous review. I couldn't agree more with your observations. This is fiction with a vengeance!
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