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To Be Satisfied...
Author: Perdita
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(Added on Jan 15, 2005)
(This month 7519 readers) (Total 19233 readers) |
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This is a graphic story involving an agreement between a sub and her Master. Modeled realistically after an encounter. The protagonist is 20-something girl, strong willed and resistant, who feels she knows something of what her Master wants. Then again, she also thinks a piece of paper will place a boundary on the limits that the Master will test. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
Rating:  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Nikaia
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Jan 10, 2006 |
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I have absolutely no respect for any author who plagiarizes from others' works. Many portions of this story, lines which I can specifically quote, not to mention point you to book, page number, and line from which they originally came, are taken from the novel Kushiel's Dart by Jacqueline Carey. That is utterly despicable, to take direct quotes from another author and try to pass them off as part of your own original work. How pathetic. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jan 20, 2005 |
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Er, is there some reason the story is told twice? Artistic? Anything? I'm confused.
Ignoring the second one for the moment, the mechanics of the story are fine; it's the plot which needs some work. Master seems to do things at random. We need some information as to why these things are being done, not just what is being done.
Otherwise it doesn't make sense. (5/10)
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