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Dungeon Of Denial
Author: Dangermouse
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(Added on Jun 3, 2005)
(This month 49904 readers) (Total 81966 readers) |
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A woman is taken prisoner by lesbians to be used in the manufacture of a new aphrodisiac. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Story is okay, as is the writing. However, the writer is sometimes too eager to give things away, as if we couldn't surmise for ourselves, taking some of the reading fun away in the process.
All in all, not a bad effort.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Happy123456
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Mar 5, 2006 |
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This is such an excellent story! I have read it many times. Your descriptive style makes the reader feel the frustration of Anne as she is teased over and over.
I like the creativity of the "lamb" idea. It really is a good way of describing these captured women.
You are a very talented writer!
Please write a new chapter!! Great job! (10/10)
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BruceCC
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Jun 22, 2005 |
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Intense and wicked story of denial. You like reading about young women trapped on the verge of the big O, then you'll love this story. Eagerly awaiting additional chapters. (10/10)
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Ruby
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Jun 7, 2005 |
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Wicked torture, wonderful presmise. That Tina really knows her stuff. Now I need to get some relief! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
RhondaLee
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Jun 7, 2005 |
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I would also suggested better formatting. You need to enter a full line of space in between each paragraphs. The dozens of paragraphs are too closely jammed together. Why not space it out? (8/10)
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dastardly
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Jun 7, 2005 |
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This is the kind of story I've always been waiting for. I would suggest better formatting.
Can't wait for more parts to come. (10/10)
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shred97
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Jun 6, 2005 |
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The story line is made for a larger and more complex novel, with the lesbian handlers having a smaller role, and corrupt physicians hired by the evil pharmaceutical company, with conspiracies and a boyfriend who somehow finds her and rescues her. I would cowrite and can be contacted at shred97west@yahoo.com (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 6, 2005 |
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i will let the rating spesk for itself no wordy review needed here (10/10)
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jth215
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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Great start. I hope there is a lot in store. Thanks (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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An excellent story with a unique idea and a good style. The worst disadvantage: It waits the 2nd year for continuation ... (8/10)
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