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The Queen of Piece
Author: Dom Master
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(Added on Jun 11, 2005)
(This month 24884 readers) (Total 58288 readers) |
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A young white cheerleader finds herself being initiated into an all black BDSM club. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Aug 21, 2007 |
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The old story of someone letting other do horrible things to them just to avoid the minor embarrassment of a sex tape being shown to family/friends. Blackmail only works if the alternative to not complying is worse not the other way round.
Apart from that some decent sex but nowhere near as good as in some other stories of the author.
(5/10)
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- Replied by:
DomMaster
(Edit) (Aug 25, 2007)
- This story just never got off the starting line. Thanks for the feedback.
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| Reviewer:
littleone_
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Dec 28, 2006 |
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Great story, well worth reading. The only thing it is lacking for a perfect score of a 10 is a real ending. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
DomMaster
(Edit) (Jan 10, 2007)
- Thanks for the review. Unfortunately, I got distracted early into this story and haven't had a chance to finish it. Hopefully, I'll be able to return to the queen and finish putting her in her place.
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| Reviewer:
cdacat
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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All your previous stories are very enjoyable, but this by far is the best yet. The focus placed on Jackie's reactions is well done, and the setup is fairly plausible. And thank goodness you have a firm grip on spelling and grammar; when poorly approached, those issues become surprisingly distracting. I also appreciate the focus on the rough sex and the avoidance of the introduction of torture instrumements; when whips and electrified nipple clamps are sometimes enjoyable, those stories often tend to go in another direction, focusing more on torture and less on reaming. An additional thank-you for the double penetration. From personal preference, the only request would be more verbal reactions from the victim later during the story (pleading to stop, or being humiliated by being forced to beg to be fucked)...but that's just my thing. Thanks for the great read. I eagerly await further stories from you, so please don't stop what you're doing. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DomMaster
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2005)
- I certainly appreciate your feedback cdacat. I have to admit dialog is not my strong point and I tend to avoid it because it sounds to contrived. I'll work on it. This story was just a good ol' fashioned gang rape, plain and simple, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm planning to add chapters until she is dethroned - any suggestions?
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