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The Task Author: Syren
(Added on Jul 10, 2005) (This month 18470 readers) (Total 43152 readers)
A young submissive is given a daunting task by her cyber-Master.

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Number of Ratings: 12
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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 9, 2009
Very much like a story about a mute, as nothing is said by the girl, but it works perfectly.
Well written, satisfying tale.
JJ (9/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Oct 12, 2008
great story great job, great humiliation (9/10)

Reviewer: bigcat (Edit) Rating: Sep 18, 2006
Good hot erotic tale of consensual submission. (9/10)

Reviewer: Ruby (Edit) Rating: Jul 16, 2005
For lovers of humilation, abuse, pain, fantasy rape, with the girl treated like nothing more than a fuck toy, this is story to put on your list.
Note: An editing refresh would pop this tale up another notch. It's missing the emotions behind the actions. (7/10)

Reviewer: Jacen (Edit) Rating: Jul 15, 2005
The editing is terrible, with numerous examples of 'he' instead of 'she' and worse slip-ups. The writing was also in a rather quick 'he fucked her, and it was good' style. And, of course, the Young tag is used incorrectly. Worth reading, yes, but not a masterpiece by any means. (7/10)

Reviewer: BDSgirl (Edit) Rating: Jul 15, 2005
i liked the idea, and mostly liked the writing, the lack of editing let it down. (7/10)

Reviewer: PallMall (Edit) Rating: Jul 12, 2005
What a great start - thx! This is real humiliation - make her a public fucktoy - pls add more chapters soon! (10/10)

Reviewer: bobanddianne (Edit) Rating: Jul 12, 2005
Absolutely delightful... a true work of art.
What more can we say? (10/10)

Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: Jul 11, 2005
A very well done story. I was sad to see the words "the end" as this would have made a nice longer story. Whith her being given other tasks to do. (9/10)

Reviewer: LordVetinari (Edit) Rating: Jul 11, 2005
An interesting fantasy, well-told, though not enough torture to be fully to my taste. (8/10)

Reviewer: XtremeInk (Edit) Rating: Jul 10, 2005
The good:
Excellent read. Love the ideas behind to torture. Very hot.
The not so good:
Needs editing, but hell, I can relate to that!
(9/10)

Reviewer: The_ZoRo (Edit) Rating: Jul 10, 2005
Excelent story. It had my attention right from the beginning and didn't get go once. I am pleased :) (9/10)

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