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The Second Task
Author: Syren
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(Added on Jul 10, 2005)
(This month 16940 readers) (Total 40397 readers) |
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Sequel to 'The Task', Jane finds that her second task will change her life forever. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 9, 2009 |
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A bit of a disappointing start but the ending made good for that.
Again, above average writing with a lot of good ideas.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ropetrick
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Oct 4, 2005 |
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Nice story, the thing I don't like about pain in stories is that it mostly comes from spanking and other things we've already seen or red often. Variation is nice, plus this story scores some points on credibility. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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great sequel (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jul 16, 2005 |
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Quite good, and I didn't see the denouement coming! Here's hoping for a Third Task. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tina.matthews
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Jul 11, 2005 |
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A very good read. Definately the work of a very imaginative & constructive??/distructive?? mind.(pun intended!)
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Too much of blood though for my taste. Same can be communicated without the blood. Secondly, it definately requires a proof-reading.
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Looking forward to the next chapter, the cunt's adventures with her new mistress!! (7/10)
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Master_chris
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Jul 11, 2005 |
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I loved this story so much, I would like to see more on whats happens, Excellent, Hot action, and I loved the torture to the slut. (9/10)
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XtremeInk
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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The Good:
Excellent, hot action. Loved the torture and am hoping that there will be another chapter in this series.
The Bad:
Still could use an editor to help out, but I know from experience that it's difficult to find a good one.
Thanks for a good read. (9/10)
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