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    Average 
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    BDSgirl
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    Sep 29, 2005 | 
   
   
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        mm, i liked this story because it was so beleivable!! i like the characters, and i can see this happening between real people. more of the same type is very welcome, please MAster. respectfully blu (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Mad Lews
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    Sep 28, 2005 | 
   
   
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        I found the story nicely done, I admit it's the type of story I like and the characters were quite believable. There  were  a few minor slip ups grammatically but we're not in English class here. Overall it's as good or better than most stories on the site. Please keep writing and tell us more. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    MsMadison
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    Sep 26, 2005 | 
   
   
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        This is the best story I've hread in a long time.  Great characters, and a relationship that feels realistic and sweet.  Thank you, Master! ;) (10/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    heycarrieanne
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    Sep 26, 2005 | 
   
   
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        I hate to give anyone a rating this low, but your story is simply very poorly written.  There is absolutely no flow to it at all -- it is stilted.  Perhaps you might want to rework it and try again. (2/10) 
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