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The Keiko Yamaguchi Story
Author: Fernando Baka
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(Added on Oct 12, 2005)
(This month 10234 readers) (Total 28554 readers) |
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A female student is sent by her dean to deliver a special invitation to a wealthy industrialist outside of Tokyo who takes her to be a spy or a trespasser. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Oct 31, 2005 |
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Interesting. A fun variation on the "captured co-ed" genre, with some unusual and sexy tortures.
Your use of the language is extremely good. I was a little put off by the sheer detail of Keiko's disrobement, but that's far better than too LITTLE detail. Also, I never had the impression that Keiko was in any real danger - there was little suspense.
That said, I very much enjoyed this and will look forward to other work by you. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Oct 17, 2005 |
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First, I didn't think it was particularly
plausible. Second, the writing was overly
(and pointlessly) detailed. (Why do we need
to be told, for example, which arm was removed
from the jacket first?) Third, the characters
were cardboard. Fourth, the ending was far
too abrupt. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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I also thought this story was well writen. It had good content, excellent detail, and realistic reactions. The only thing I thought odd, (though it didn't count against it) was finding a Japanese industrialist with a tickling fetish. I've heard about Japanese sex fetishes, and I would have imagined that the industrialist would have a more...uh kinky side. And they call us gaigin! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
CortezFan
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Oct 13, 2005 |
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wonderful story, and extremely well written! (10/10)
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