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Teaching The Au Pair To Submit-An Outtake
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Nov 13, 2005)
(This month 29218 readers) (Total 66762 readers) |
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In February 2005 I published the novel, “Teaching The Au Pair To Submit”. During editing, the publisher suggested that I delete this chapter (it already had one chapter with the Captain, the strip search chapter at the airport) as it seemed to be too much of this character. I agreed and it was left out. Since I spent considerable time writing it, I thought you might like to read it. |
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| Reviewer:
Anneya
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May 7, 2006 |
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Another brilliant piece of writing. You are a great talent. (10/10)
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sheilagirl
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Nov 27, 2005 |
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I loved this missing chapter. It was awesome. Thanks for sharing it with us. (10/10)
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Breathless
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Nov 19, 2005 |
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Wow. This story left me, well, breathless! I don't know if I've read any of Powerone's work before but I now expect to find everything of his and eat it up (so to speak). Great chapter, Powerone - makes me want to read the novel. (10/10)
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DungeonMaster6
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Nov 19, 2005 |
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One question. Why on earth would the publishers not want this chapter included? The description of each action was impeccable. The pace of the story was perfect, and her reactions to each humiliation was well described. It held my interest throughout. Perhaps I should read the rest. (10/10)
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nikita
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Nov 19, 2005 |
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P1, I bought this story and enjoyed very much. Pleased that you posted this chapter. I feel this was an added bonus to your already hot hot book.
What a nasty Captain... (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Nov 18, 2005 |
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Very nice, in his own very nasty sort of way.Now I'll need toread the book. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 18, 2005 |
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it is powerone, nothing more needs to be said (10/10)
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