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My Black-Maled Wife!
Author: TJ Ryder
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(Added on Feb 8, 2006)
(This month 10970 readers) (Total 25584 readers) |
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Cuckold learns his wife is returning to her old black loving ways and pretends to her he doesn\'t know it. |
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Average (?):  (2/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pdxcuckold
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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TJ Ryder is a chronic spammer, promoting a web site that serves up very poor quality cuckold drawings. This story has clearly been crammed into the library, with no care for formatting; the paragraph breaks have been trashed. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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just plain bad, it had potential to be a good reverge blackmail story, but way to hard to follow (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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Had a difficult time reading this. More paragraphs would have helped immensely, but the grammar is atrocious as well. I always try to find something positive in any story, but the author made that exceedingly difficult. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Feb 9, 2006 |
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Originally I was going to attempt to offer some constructive critisism regarding this tale. However, being curious, I checked this authors other offerings and found them to be considerably different than this offering. It appears, based on comparison, that this author no longer cares about the quality of his stories. So, I offer nothing constructive except to the reader; This story is everything a story should not be. (1/10)
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chksng19
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Feb 9, 2006 |
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Take a trip back in time. Remember English class? Try to use what the teacher tried to help you learn.
A really sad effort. Read some of the four and five star authors here and emulate them. (1/10)
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C_Lakewood
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Feb 8, 2006 |
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Perfect! A 13 Kb story in one long paragraph.
And the writing isn't much better than the
formatting. The plot-line is tired, the
characters cardboard, and the whole thing a
waste of time. (2/10)
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