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Work of a Slut
Author: chooky104
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(Added on Jul 11, 2006)
(This month 23603 readers) (Total 53773 readers) |
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A day in the life of a true Slut. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 19, 2006 |
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very well written (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Jul 19, 2006 |
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A pretty hot story, over all. The descriptions of the action were pretty solid groin yankers and the concept was relatively interesting. However, the writing style needs a bit of refinement and certain phrasings need to be adjusted. "Undid" or "Undoing" should never be used. Also, there was a switch in writing perspectives about mid-way through the first chapter that was quite ponderous. The technical errors were also rather a hinderance. Really, a few adjustments would make this tale quite good. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
oldwino
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Jul 16, 2006 |
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Great concept but too short. This is almost an outline for what could be a great story or series. I think the author has great potential. (10/10)
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al90000
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Jul 12, 2006 |
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an excellent description of a whore slut (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 11, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed your story. Had your grammar been better I would have given you a much higher score. If you would like some suggestions on how I think your writing could be improved, please email me. (6/10)
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