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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Jan 1, 2007 |
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"authoruty"is spelled authority, after ready that i was not sure howthe story would be, always spell check before you post (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jul 31, 2006 |
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Not bad this story. Some more details how she was trained would improve the story.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chattel69
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Jul 26, 2006 |
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I was hoping for more detail about the training. When you jumped foward 2 years a lot of the story is lost. Even the flashbacks were lacking in description. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Lady Marissa
(Edit) (Jul 26, 2006)
- Thank you for your review. I will take that into consideration when updating the story
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