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Surprise Attack
Author: Syren
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(Added on Jul 28, 2006)
(This month 12133 readers) (Total 33738 readers) |
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An attacker tells how he abused a women from his own perspective |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
yorts6572
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Sep 19, 2006 |
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Could have easily have been a nine except for two things:
1. Like a couple of other of your stories, you should have someone proof it for typos, misspellings, etc.
2. A loving/consensual relationship would not have ended that way. It would not have been a work-day, and she would have been thanking her master for the experience, and for extending her limits. Had she reacted with that much disrespect, the consequences would have been swift and severe. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Aug 16, 2006 |
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I liked the double twist. You see the first one coming, but that blinds you to the comic one, increasing its surprise value and making it funnier. Much shorter than your usual stories. (8/10)
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magnum
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Jul 31, 2006 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Was left at the end feeling good and with a smile on my face. Thanks for the contribution. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
brina
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Jul 30, 2006 |
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Really loved this especially when it made me laugh at the end.
Wish I had a husband so thoughtful
b (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 30, 2006 |
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A cute tale, but very distracted due to many spelling and word use problems. A spell checker is a wonderful thing, and the story would be better if you had used it.
An editor might help too. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Jul 30, 2006 |
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Surprising twists with explicit eroticism to stimulate the reader. I enjoyed and recommend this short episode. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 29, 2006 |
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This is a theme that has been covered--a lot--recently on this site. The man doing really bad things to the woman turns out to be her husband. Yawn! I would have given it an even lower score except that I found the golf ball twist at the end extremely amusing!! Perhaps you can liven up the next chapter a bit so I can raise your score. (5/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 28, 2006 |
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intersting concept for a story (6/10)
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