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The Sentence
Author: Willow
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(Added on Aug 10, 2006)
(This month 34552 readers) (Total 54684 readers) |
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Adultery is a capital crime in this land punishable in the worst way |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
shyloch46
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Aug 11, 2006 |
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Hi Willow, I think this was a fine story. My personal fetish is death, i like the fatal aspect in your story. But I think your story would improve, if your gave your persons names. Als I think more etails about the beaty of their bodies would be good. I don't think the spelling is that important. Itss the story that counts, isn't it? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Aug 10, 2006 |
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Poor spelling and you should have put "snuff" in your codes!!!! (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 10, 2006 |
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I liked the changing point of view in the story's telling; it kept a fresh spin on the plot. There are way too many word use errors; spell checkers don't catch 'wrong' words, or sentences with missing words. An editor does that.
Altogether, an enjoyable story. (7/10)
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