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One of the many sexual encounters of Chase and Tiffany Author: Brittany Heart
(Added on Sep 5, 2006) (This month 21663 readers) (Total 34111 readers)
After two naughty girls were caught by their mother during some girl on girl action, she decided to teach the brats a lesson in the art of pain, the only question is which girl can take more punishment

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
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Reviewer: Dryhill (Edit) Rating: Jun 26, 2010
It was worth reading, once you ignored the spelling errors and rather poor grammar. Interesting to know if the girls learnt much from the punishment, other than not to get caught in future. (7/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 16, 2009
True, there's again way too many spelling errors, but the story was cute and certainly deserves more than a meager 4...
JJ (7/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Sep 6, 2006
my biggest issue is the fonts, the green is very hard to read all in the story was ok nothing spectacular (6/10)
Replied by: JimmyJump (Edit) (Feb 16, 2009)
Quit complaining about the font size and/or colour, mkemske. Copy the text to notepad and all will be fine.
JJ

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Sep 6, 2006
Brittany, this story, while cute in its way, is written using a 'grade school' style; it sounds as though it were written for a fourth grade assignment. You could help it along by watching out for spelling and grammatical errors; one simple example? - "bended". The word is 'bent'.
You have an interesting scenario; a little more effort could produce a good, readable story. (4/10)

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