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Special Delivery
Author: sunniedays
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(Added on Feb 20, 2007)
(This month 10055 readers) (Total 22335 readers) |
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A different kind of birthday-gram. But make sure to read the instructions! |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 23, 2007 |
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I agree with the first two reviewers. Good, a little confusing, needs codes. I can't really evaluate H_Dean's comments because in my browser this is another of the stories that got butchered as it was transfered to HTML. I do understand the ending, but I'm not sure it was a good choice. I thought it was a borderline 6/7, but decided to go up this time. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Feb 21, 2007 |
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A good story, overall. Unfortunately, the manner in which the story was written was not conducive to a good read. Technically, the mistakes were astoundingly frequent; run on sentences were terribly abundant. This, more than anything, brought about my low review score. In short, it made a solid story ordinary and annoying to read.
Fix those technical mistakes and this story is a solid "7". (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Feb 20, 2007 |
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It wasn't a poorly written story, just confusing. Some story codes might have helped! (7/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 20, 2007 |
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the story was good but you need codes so readers can decide before read the story if it is there type story, and a bit more detailed storyline would have been nice as well (6/10)
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