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Caught in the Office
Author: Flinkar
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(Added on Mar 29, 2007)
(This month 20811 readers) (Total 45278 readers) |
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Caught after hours in her office, where everything is stripped away. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 20, 2008 |
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a very different type story, very well done (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
graham2830
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Apr 30, 2007 |
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The story line was quite good but the unnecessary torture was too much. I see no need to cause that kind of pain without there being some enjoyment for the characters. Why cant the characters get some enjoyment.
When the tormentor got his information why did he have to continue the treatment...?
(5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Apr 5, 2007 |
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I liked this story quite a bit - there are different stories for different times, and this one is for when some nicely described tit torture is in order. There are some issues with tenses changing, as well as third person merging into second person, but nothing that distracted too much from the enjoyment. This story doesn't need to continue, but I would be happy to read more if there is more to come. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
CrazedDog
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Apr 1, 2007 |
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Left me hanging, waiting for more. What happens next? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
daiquiri
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Apr 1, 2007 |
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too repetitive (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Mar 31, 2007 |
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Not bad, lots of titillating tit torture. Just the bare bones of a plot to give us an excuse. A quick proof reading might help for the next installment. Yes please do continue. and if you'd like throw C_Lakewood a little character development, it can't hurt. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Mar 31, 2007 |
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If you like a lot of tit-torture and no character
development at all, you'll probably like this
story. As it is, we are never told anything about
the characters, so why should we care what happens
to them? Pointless. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
EngineX
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Mar 30, 2007 |
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Great story. I like the ending with a hint of how the criminals are going to get away with their crime. We can imagine that the victim will be framed for the robbery with her subsequent disappearance assumed to be a flight from justice rather than an abduction. Of course little pear cannot possibly be allowed to escape now! I'd like to read some more of this. (9/10)
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