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Author: Poetry_in_motion
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(Added on May 24, 2007)
(This month 10648 readers) (Total 23888 readers) |
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Man goes to see local dom, then on his way out bumps into a blonde bombshell of a mistake |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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was enjoyable to read, general good premise for the story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Jul 4, 2007 |
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I liked the concept, but the writing could use a bit more flow and emotion. (7/10)
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