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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 2, 2008 |
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great concept and idea for a story love the whole aspect
would love to see a law firm operate this way, they would be busy, when you are good you are good (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Voracious Reader
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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Excellent theme, and well written story. Looking forward to additional chapters! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Satan_Klaus
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Jul 3, 2007 |
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This story has good points and I won't deny it, I love the office setting and the "masters at law" pun but there is a serious flaw in this story.
The way you set up the beginning is not how you start a story. It is not captivating but rather somewhat dull. In addition, it gives everything away far too quickly and without erotically charged context. I suggest you insert an introductory chapter before the first one that drops the reader right into the "action" at the office and explain the details and technicallities how it came to be later.
Remember the movie "star wars". It does not start with an explanation how the empire came to be, it starts with an intense, desperate battle. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 22, 2007 |
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Not a bad tale, a little slow at the start but picking up steadily. The ads, however, do very much to interfere with the story when you are reading more than one chapter. Kinda tacky. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
sirbor
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Jun 20, 2007 |
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I like the beginning of this story. I plan to read any more that you may have here. I am interested in the actual wording of the twelve commandments. Please keep up the good work. (9/10)
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