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Victim
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Aug 3, 2007)
(This month 15711 readers) (Total 31969 readers) |
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kidnap and enslavement |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 19, 2011 |
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A well told story with very good characterization and feeling for the Master. The good description of the variuos locations helps make the story more believeable.
My only complaint is there really should ahve been story codes so that the readers know what they are getting. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 25, 2007 |
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good story but it would help if you added codes to your story to give readers an idea of the theme of the story (8/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Aug 17, 2007 |
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Probably one of your better ones, if not your best. I like! (9/10)
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bolondro4
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Aug 6, 2007 |
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slow & progressive. I enjoy it. Plz, ad codes to th Storis (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
blossom
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Aug 5, 2007 |
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wow, to me this story is so very like what i love and hope for. i really hope for more chapters as this kind of thing really appeals to me. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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An old plot, clearly and well re-written, but with no real new materials or ideas. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Aug 3, 2007 |
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A nicely written male fantasy! (9/10)
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