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Wife and Friend
Author: Michael Michelle
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(Added on Sep 13, 2007)
(This month 10322 readers) (Total 18221 readers) |
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Autobiographical story of a loving NY husband and wife who invest in a male chastity device and extend their bdsm play |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Sep 22, 2007 |
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I have to agree with Mad Lews. More description would be good. I almost missed some of the action it was so glossed over - talk a bit about how people feel. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Sep 20, 2007 |
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I did read it through, it was short enough to do that. I have to believe that English is not your native tongue. With that thought in mind I'd offer the following recommendations. Have someone proofread your work before submitting it. Use more descriptions for people, as well as objects. a 'Male chastity device' is not a description, what's it look like? how does it work? is it metal? leather? latex? you get the idea. (4/10)
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trainmanretep
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Sep 14, 2007 |
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gave up after several paragraphs. Just does not make much sense (2/10)
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