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Part-Time
Author: Thndrshark
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(Added on Nov 22, 2001)
(This month 43927 readers) (Total 79242 readers) |
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The need for the money drove her to be willing to do anything, even to be a slave. But all the pain and pleasure... was she ready for all of them? |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
faust82
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Aug 11, 2004 |
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Excellent story, but haven't I seen this before? Did you sell the story to GwenMedia? This story is exactly like the Part Time series they produce. If it's you who wrote it, congratulations on the sale :) Oh, and everyone who enjoyed this, check out the movies. They're great.
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Sep 14, 2003 |
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Good story premise, but it seems like the two parts didn't seem to flow together (character's name is the most obvious). Also, it was a little tough getting the sense of time within the story. Things move on quite quickly with only a little insight as to what happened over several dates/months. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
johnsteel
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Oct 17, 2002 |
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scary but brilliant (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 11, 2002 |
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This author is capable of better; the leading character's name changed between chapters 1 & 2 (Corey/Corrie). Good intensity, but the writing was only fair (6/10)
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f8ffffffff
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Jan 13, 2002 |
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Excellent bondage story! (10/10)
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