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What I did on my Holidays.
Author: Lisa Jones
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(Added on Nov 3, 2007)
(This month 28564 readers) (Total 46137 readers) |
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A young student returns home for the summer vacation and learns some lessons that will change his life. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
xSoCalCynicx
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Jan 24, 2011 |
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Another great Lisa Jones story - you make the suspension of disbelief easy by your characterizations! (10/10)
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chuck
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Dec 24, 2007 |
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Very good story. You have a knack for writing these fantasies. For my personal taste, I like it better when you get into the mind of the participants and their feelings. This effort was lighter in that regard than some of your other stories.
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With the addition of the third chapter, it easily slides up to a 10 rating. Thanks for adding to the story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
phrazer
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Dec 8, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed the storyt line and once again the writing was excellent. Only noticed a few typos and I am constantly noticing these in novels! (9/10)
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bound_bob
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Nov 9, 2007 |
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Your writing always turns into a bad boy. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dijkstra
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Nov 6, 2007 |
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Great story, Although a little bit unreal.
Still, Greay Plays, and nice characters.
It made it for me,
And I'm waiting for the 3rd part. (9/10)
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