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Waiting
Author: Lisa Jones
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(Added on Jan 29, 2008)
(This month 10328 readers) (Total 18746 readers) |
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Many of my fans have said that I\'m better at writing about the \'why\'s, rather than the \'what\'s - so here\'s a story all about the why\'s as told whilst waiting... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Dec 10, 2011 |
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One of the best stories I've ever read! Lisa Jones is fabulous...read everything she writes...you'll be glad you did! (10/10)
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Deanna
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Apr 18, 2010 |
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An amazing short story. I loved her explaination about how she ended up where she is. It is wonderfully personal and intimate in the descriptions. I loved having the story told by her character as opposed to a third party narrative. Surprisingly erotic was her description of her clamped nipples being rubbed against the wall. Realistic and erotic. (9/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 8, 2010 |
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Wow, i am amazed at how much characterization there is in such a short story. i simply love the line "smell like a camels armpit" i did not know camels had armpits, and do not know what they smell like but i get the picture very clearly and will not approach without plenty of cans of deoderant.
Yet another excellent read from Lisa Jones, just like her other stories i hope we will hear more of these two and perhaps what eventually happens to Jezz. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 16, 2009 |
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Endearing, well-written tale. Lisa Jones knows her pappenheimers and her descriptions and characterizations are a delight to read.
Would have given a Nine, but going for Ten to balance-out the (to me) unfair Seven from bound bob.
JJ (10/10)
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onewhoadores
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Nov 26, 2008 |
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A superb, short, D/s love story of a young woman well on the path to self destruction, who is saved by a caring authority figure. That She becomes the girl's Goddess seems only natural as She provides salvation, redemption, and most of all love to this lost soul. That D/s, BDSM plays an important role in their relationship is almost besides the point. They have forged a loving life together, meeting each other's inner needs, out of the depths of near certain ruin. (10/10)
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bound_bob
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Jan 30, 2008 |
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Movie of the week material. F/f is not my forte but your writing is good as always. (7/10)
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