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Amish No More
Author: beagle9690
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(Added on Mar 9, 2008)
(This month 32128 readers) (Total 48396 readers) |
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A young innocent Amish woman is stalked for a year, and then forcibly abducted. Her abductor, a divorced man desiring a women to bend to his will and satisfy his sexual needs and share his intellectual interests. As this will be his first slave, he sought the help of experienced Dominant\'s and by chance met a Mistress at her dance school. They become fast friends,dancing partners/ part time lovers. She assists him in the training of his newslave and as a result brings in her slaves to assist in the grooming and training. The Mistress introduces him to an exclusive secret society of slaveowners. As time goes by the Mistress becomes jealous of his slave and tries to blackmail him, but in the end fails, becoming his property. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
smokey1957
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Aug 6, 2008 |
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if a story is so interesting that you want to read more of it, it is a nice story i hope for the writer that this review wil give him more reviews. thank you so far i am now going to read part two (9/10)
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- Replied by:
beagle9690
(Edit) (Aug 6, 2008)
- Thank you for your kind post. I recently purchased a laptop and transferred all of my files to it.
I am still in the learning to use it, particularly the mouse.
When I read my story on the website, I noticed that some paragraphs were repeated twice please excuse that. I have since e-mailed the webmaster and sent the corrected part 2.
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Maitre1962
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Aug 1, 2008 |
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Nice story! I hope ,there is a sequel or two planned! I just read the second part! it is as good,if not better then part 1 (9/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 12, 2008 |
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was enjoyable and a very intersting concept using the Amish as a subject put a different perspective on their lives (7/10)
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RiverOtter
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Mar 10, 2008 |
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Not bad at all. The story was interesting and the protagonist was likable. My only criticisms 1) It is sometimes hard to tell which quote belongs to which character, and 2) The kidnap victim becomes a willing submissive awfully quickly, and speaks like someone who has already read stories like this. It would also be nice to see the story codes. Otherwise, it was fun to read. (7/10)
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