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My Bitchy-hot Niece, Denise
Author: James P
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(Added on May 14, 2008)
(This month 50117 readers) (Total 88221 readers) |
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Unemployed 30 year old man forced to move in with older sister. His niece Denise is now 18 and not a little girl anymore. When he's caught wanking, she humiliates him severely and to his great joy. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
obscur
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Sep 13, 2008 |
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It's a enjoyable story, even me I hope you want continue it. You will write it like yoi fell of course, you are the author, but sometimes authors develops story like this with so many new female charachters who enjoys the domination that the story lose its authenticity. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
rockslip
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May 28, 2008 |
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Great story! Well written and a great plot. I'd love to see more parts. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
James P
(Edit) (May 28, 2008)
- Thanks. I'm working on an update.
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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May 17, 2008 |
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Not a bad plot but wonder how it will all work out when Mom gets home. (7/10)
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