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The Mistress
Author: The Domina of Paradise
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(Added on May 14, 2008)
(This month 29703 readers) (Total 48599 readers) |
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An African mistress enjoys pleasant times with her white slaves at her vast private island estate. ***This is a work of violent fantasy. This story is to be enjoyed privately, not acted upon publicly.*** |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jasper24
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May 28, 2008 |
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Fantastic, very exciting. I especially loved the ruthless abuse and total lack of simpathy for the slaves. Slaves that are used purely for the sadistic entertainment of a goddess, like the slave carpet..brilliant. I also loved the use of both male and female slaves. Please continue. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Domina of Paradise
(Edit) (May 28, 2008)
- Thank you for reading my first story. I hope to improve with time and effort. I will be submitting more stories in the future. Be on the look-out!
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| Reviewer:
slave2isis
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May 25, 2008 |
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what an incredibe story i do hope there are further installments she is delectably despotic loved the discriptions of apprel perhaps you could mention her jewels a paticular fetish of mine loved the way she is oblivious to white trash i think she would gain pleasure from turning beauty to uglyness very evil very aroused me been a puny slave i have a fantasy about been cuckhold by a god and goddess this story proves its quality because it stands repeated reading i found one of the most enthralling bdsm stories ever i do pray it develops into a series of novels (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Domina of Paradise
(Edit) (May 17, 2008)
- Thank you for your kind words! I always appreciate reader opinions. I am trying to grow as a brand-new author. If readers want to contribute new chapters to this initial story, please feel free to submit them to me by email. Everyone can then enjoy even more kinks/fetishes. I only wrote about a few in this initial story.
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| Reviewer:
esclave46
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May 18, 2008 |
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Very nice and exciting storie. (10/10)
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