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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
prey4me
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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How about Part II. There gotta be other girls out there on the Prairie! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
schoolboylv
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Jun 26, 2008 |
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Better than your other two stories. Try developing your ideas in greater detail, breaking your work into more than a few paragraphs, and taking your time to really describe what is happening. Your ideas aren't bad, but your writing level right now is very low. (3/10)
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