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Office Politics
Author: Diiamond
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(Added on Jul 20, 2008)
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Sarah's job hunt turns out to be more than she bargained for. Her interview goes so well, that the company creates a new job just for her. |
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| Reviewer:
blackbutterfly97
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Jan 30, 2016 |
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Really would love to read more, so please upload more of this story soon. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 6, 2009 |
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Story started-off well enough, but as of paragraph 3, everything turns pear-shaped, when it is revealed that "Sarah was easily able to switch her persona back and forth between that of a prim, intelligent, ambition laden task-master and that of a alluring, dark, submissive love slave who was willing to do as she was told, every time."
I mean, there had to be a more subtle way to get to the stage of Sarah's submissive streak.
As I said, from the moment of 'revelation', I found the story to be veering between a well written, well-paced erotic tale and an over the top, ludicrous romp.
The way Sarah is presented, i.e. willing to accept the things she's introduced to during her 'interview', she has to be a complete airhead, enslaved to her darker feelings. As a consequence, the high-profile ambitious and intelligent professional side of Sarah is utterly unbelievable and doesn't fit her in any way.
Like I mentioned before, the author could have made the story far more interesting and enticing, by slowing the pace and going about things in a more subtle way, giving Sarah a high ranking job and introducing us with her slow descent to some kind of office pet or guinea pig.
Also, Sarah is presented in a rather 2-dimensional way, being first and foremost the slave of the author, as she doesn't seem to have any thoughts whatsoever about what's happening with/to her. This especially is the case in the second part of the tale, where Sarah is the centre of attention, but who's personality is out of the picture entirely, as we only 'see' and hear both her bosses. A pity.
Still, I find the story likeable as it is --thanks to the fact that it is well written-- and intriguing enough to be looking out to further additions.
JJ (7/10)
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YngMaster8
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Nov 6, 2008 |
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I like where the story is going. The segments could be a little longer perhaps. (9/10)
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Escritor
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Oct 31, 2008 |
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Exquisite. I sincerely hope there is another chapter coming. I want to know what her job details are!! ;) (9/10)
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ukMasterC
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Jul 24, 2008 |
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Brilliant story - look forward to reading the next chapter of it and your other work. (10/10)
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