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I am a slave, sell me
Author: BJojomogo
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(Added on Aug 16, 2008)
(This month 22001 readers) (Total 40430 readers) |
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Young girl, drifting, reads about a man selling his life on Ebay, and decides to sell herself into slavery |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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Again, I partly agree with masterdw (maybe we should start something), but I have to at the same time disagree, because it is not the subject that matters, but the way it is brought.
And I must add that although the subject is tackled well, there's a serious lack in detail. Well, maybe not in detail, but in feelings. Because, in the end, it's all about feelings, isn't it?
Also, the ending was a tad forced, as if BJ wanted by all means show that BJ knows about plot-twists.
Okay, BJ knows about plot twists, just watch it you don't overtwist things.
And after all, it's BJ's story, so who am I to complain?
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Deathnote
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Aug 26, 2008 |
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I disagree that there is no conflict. It's just that the conflict in this story is a little more subtle than most. The story could had used a little more fleshing out, though, especially after the protagonist arrived at her master's mansion. Half the time, I felt like I was reading a synopsis. >_> (7/10)
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Chuckdom19
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Aug 22, 2008 |
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A fine tale. The ending was too rushed, however: the growth of love should have been developed a bit more to make it more believable. Nice to see a happy ending! A consensual slave story is a rarity. Some further creativity might be used in the telling of the tale as far as penalties paid by the heroine. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
TheVariableX
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Aug 19, 2008 |
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I disagree that all fiction must consist of a roller coaster of ups and downs and overcome challenges. I found this story to be an enjoyable and compelling read.
I can sympathize with the protagonists feelings of isolation and her decision to create a purpose for her life.
Most of my favorite stories do not end as well for the heroine and I found this one strangely uplifting. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Aug 17, 2008 |
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There can be no story without conflict and you have none. There is nothing original in your story.sorry, but you can probably do better. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
BJojomogo
(Edit) (Aug 17, 2008)
- You have fantasies of women doing things against their will, I have fantasies of women wanting to be punished and humiliated. Tjis does not make you right or me right. Where you are wrong is to review a story which clearly says consensual and ctitisise it for that reason. Try reading other stories that say non consensual (there are plenty of them) and leave my consensual stories alone. Other reviews show I am not alone. I do not write for you, but for people who share my fantasies.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 20, 2009)
- Right-on, brother/sister...
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| Reviewer:
kingfisher12547
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Aug 17, 2008 |
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The story was wonderful and kept me reading to the very end. The ending was a real surprise. Keep the writing up. you are good at it. (7/10)
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