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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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well written and good theme (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
skp2bear
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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Very well written in most places. Has a few grammatical errors which slows the reader. For instance I've never been around a malodorous bee that stunk but have been stung by one. Also this one files a complaint when something she has just purchased proves to be defectine but she also hopes and prays she will be very compliant during he initial training for her new Master so she will be collared by him and get to meet him. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
LewisC
(Edit) (Nov 1, 2008)
- skp2bear, I agree that this story should have been more thoroughly edited before it was sent in for publication. I have now taken care of the editing issue and trust that others will find the story appealing in its corrected version. LC
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