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Auction
Author: fallenstar
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(Added on Mar 5, 2009)
(This month 9436 readers) (Total 16153 readers) |
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A sub is put up to auction, unknowing that a Dom she used to know is there and wants her |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 29, 2010 |
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i am a stickler for proper characterization, thereby enabling me,the reader, to really understand the main players in a story. This story has very little depth to either character, to the point they are almost one dimensional. Added to this is an ending that is pretty predictable. So why have i given it a 9? Well the story works and works very well.
Normally i would not have finished reading such a story but in this case i could not stop until the end. i look forward to reading the next part of the story. Thank you, well done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
skittish doe
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Dec 22, 2009 |
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Your story plot is wonderfully balanced with realistic emotion, a mental connection and romanticism. Nicely done! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
fallenstar
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2010)
- -smiles- thanks skittish! i'm glad you approve of it..
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dorothystrangelove
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Mar 26, 2009 |
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I really liked this story because it was not only a tale of a master and a slave, but there is love running through it from start to finish, which I always think enhances a tale and there's no harm at all in putting some romance into porn piction - I think adult fiction needs more romance.Well done. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
fallenstar
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2010)
- I'm glad you think so, I liked how the small amount of romance adds to the story, thanks for reading :)
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| Reviewer:
Lillyrose123
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Mar 9, 2009 |
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Can't wait to read more... Loved it... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
fallenstar
(Edit) (Mar 9, 2009)
- -smiles- thanks for taking the time to read it!! i'm glad you liked it
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| Reviewer:
moco
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Mar 6, 2009 |
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oh wow , such a wonderful story sadness and fear then surprise and joy. I loved this story. more please. great job fallenstar (9/10)
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- Replied by:
fallenstar
(Edit) (Mar 9, 2009)
- thanks moco :)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 6, 2009 |
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"Aw, not again" was my first reaction after reading the synopsys.
But to my delight, the subject is tackled with extreme skill and is so well written that it doesn't matter that the path ventured on is so beaten it makes a hunting trail look like a five-lane freeway.
An excellent introduction that makes yours truly stay on the lookout for further chapters.
Great start!
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
fallenstar
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2009)
- Thank you so much for reviewing my story! I was very nervous about putting any of my stories up but my Dom helped convince me to try. Your review definitely made me feel good about it! ---fallen
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