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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
(Edit) |
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Jan 6, 2010 |
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The other review I made of this story have been deleted unfortunately because of the hardware failure.
At any rate I think this is one of the better stories I've read in here.
It could perhaps have been improved a little by splitting the story up into chapters, but that's really the only major thing I'd like to have different.
It's fairly believable characters although some in here claim that the female protagonist is too mature for her age.
Also the erotic bits of the story is not what makes the story good.
It's overall well written I'd say.
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Story: 10/10
The erotic parts 9/10 (perhaps even 10/10)
Overall impression?
I liked it a lot.
I would recommend this story, provided that you, the reader, like stories that have a slow start in an erotic sense and that you don't mind stories of some length.
Losalt (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Losalt
(Edit) (May 1, 2010)
- For the record..
The link to the story is dead now unfortunaly but the story can be read at http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=7816
I hope you'll enjoy it like I have :)
Losalt
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