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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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Umpteenth story of which my earlier review went on a permanent vacation. I recall saying something about the self-erasing disc (hard to do in a car's CD-player) and about the instructions about what Jan should wear --and the details about the humiliating nature of the clothes-- the lot being a tad redundant when no-one besides the 'tormentors' is there to witness those clothes. Besides, the first thing to go is Jan's vestimentary outfit...
But besides these minor 'grievances', "Submissive Wives Academy Of Training" is very well done.
A tad stilted at times --especially some of the dialogue-- but again those are minor flaws which often have more to do with my nit-picking nature and tendency for perfection than with Jack R's writing style.
All in all, a very pleasing effort.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jasper24
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May 22, 2010 |
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Excellent story! Thanks for posting this.
This is one of the best I've read in quite some time. The humiliation is brilliant and the pace/ speed is perfect. I do hope you'll continue posting. Looking forward to it. (10/10)
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